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Monday, October 24, 2011

#9 Descriptive writing"

1. How different is descriptive writing from narrative writing?



Writing a Narrative composition appeals to one of humankind's basic instincts, the impulse to share stories. Sometimes the aim of the story-teller is simply to entertain, to provide a moment of escape from the business of the day or the horrors of the night, but sometimes the aim of the story-teller is to instruct, to help others in their understanding of something. The best part of teaching in this way is that our listeners' natural resistance to heeding the words of others is low and they are not always aware that they are being taught anything until it's too late – we've got them.

The skills needed to narrate a story well are not entirely the same as the skills needed to write a good essay. Some wonderful short fiction writers are not particularly good essayists and vice versa. Still, it is useful to look at those elements that make up a good narrative and know how to apply what we learn toward making our essays as dramatic as possible whenever that is appropriate.

While descriptive writing is the ability to describe something convincingly will serve a writer well in any kind of essay situation. The most important thing to remember is that your job as writer is to show, not tell. If you say that the tree is beautiful, your readers are put on the defensive: "Wait a minute," they think. "We'll be the judge of that! Show us a beautiful tree and we'll believe." Do not rely, then, on adjectives that attempt to characterize a thing's attributes. Lovely, exciting, interesting – these are all useful adjectives in casual speech or when we're pointing to something that is lovely, etc., but in careful writing they don't do much for us; in fact, they sound hollow.



2. How does the maxim “Show, don’t tell” explain how one writes descriptively.

Illustrate with your own example.

More than any other kind of writing, descriptive writing strives to invoke a vivid and involved experience for the reader. It is often considered as one of the most creative forms of writing since it is basically about being able to evoke emotions in the reader through the power of words. A good descriptive essay, for instance, has the ability to arouse the reader’s senses and create a lasting impact on his or her mind. This effect can be achieved not through statistics and facts, but by detailed descriptions and observations.





3. How do you as a writer make your language descriptive? How do you add depth and

texture to a piece of writing?

An abstract summarizes the contents of an academic paper. Abstracts precede many articles in academic journals of the sciences and humanities. They tell the reader the point of the paper, its argument, major points and the conclusion it reaches based on its findings. The first sentence of an abstract introduces a problem or outlines a gap in current research in a particular area. In other words, it seeks to establish the relevance or significance of the paper



4. Other than one word modifiers, what other modifiers maybe employed in descriptive

writing?



There are some adjectives which can only be used before a noun, in the attributive position. For instance, we talk about the main problem but cannot say, the problem was main.

Adjectives which occur only in the attributive position are generally those which identify something as being of a particular type. For instance, we can talk about a financial decision where financial distinguishes this from other types of decision, e.g.: medical, political. This group of adjectives are often referred to as classifying adjectives, and rarely occur in the predicative position unless we specifically want to emphasise a contrast,

Sunday, October 23, 2011

#8 ""BEST MOTIVATIONAL VIDEO EVER"

The main message of the video is that no matter how big our problem is, there is always purpose why God gave us problems because He knows we can handle it. Like the man in the video, Although he has no arms and legs, he is still happy and contented despite of his physical disabilities.
      I am inspired by the video because I realized that physical disability is not the hindrance to show one's talent and ability. The man in the video shows that he is proud and is not ashamed to show his talent and shows his ability to do things which normal people can do. I am thankful to God that my physical outlook is good although I am not that tall enough but that doesn't matter to me at all because I am proud and satisfied of what I have right now.
       If I were to become an inspiration for others, I will do good things such as helping those who are in needs especially those who needs love and compassion and also by being a good example to others.
       Be strong! Remember that no matter how hard your life may seem, there is always someone out there who have it worse than you.  

# "MATURITY"

I dislike this quote      

“A mature person is one who is does not think only in absolutes, who is able to be objective even when deeply stirred emotionally, who has learned that there is both good and bad in all people and all things, and who walks humbly and deals charitably” -Eleanor Roosevelt.


Maturity is a psychological term used to indicate how a person responds to the circumstances or environment in an appropriate manner. This response is generally learned rather than instinctive, and is not determined by one's age. Maturity also encompasses being aware of the correct time and place to behave and knowing when to act appropriately, according to the situation and the culture of the society one lives in





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#6 "My Journey"

 They said  studying in IIT is just like walking in a forest, a virgin forest. You can't expect the dangers that you are going to encounter. Like studying in IIT , you don't exactly know the challenges that you are going to face but still, you are willing to finish it.
When I was first year high school, way back 2007,there are four things I knew about IIT. First, this institution achieved a lot of recognition and good feedback. Then,I noticed our the teachers who graduated at IIT were well trained and were an excellent teachers. They knew how to handle different kinds of student and made their lessons remained in our minds. After that, students there were idolized because once you are studying there you are considered smart. Because of these observations, I found myself fond to be in IIT and my journey begin here.
Being in IIT is not an easy task, I find it so hard. It's like entering in an eye of a needle. Problems are everywhere. below are the obstacles I encounter. First, our house is kilometers away from the school so I need to commute everyday, back and forth. Because of that, I was always reprimanded by my teacher of being always late which I work hard to change it. Second, since in our family, there are three who are in college, my parents have hard time in paying our tuition fees,we felt their hardships in fulfilling their responsibility to us. Even they don't told us  the problem but we feel it so we try our best to find ways to help them at the same time, helping ourselves to study hard for our future. Third, I find it hard to adopt and cope a new environment that was highly different from the old one and to meet and to be with different kinds of people is a big big problem I encounter. Fourth, the challenging part of being a student is to do all requirements at all the same short time and the deadlines are fast approaching because every student are afraid having low grades.Fifth, coping with stress. College life is a stressful one, coping with it is such a damn hard thing.